Chapter 6 – Page 17

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The first time I did this scene Joltoh’s conversation was over rather quickly which didn’t give readers enough time to really absorb his character.  I made sure that his flippant jerk character got a lot more establishment this time.  By the way, the answer to Strato’s question is yes; yes he would be as flippant if he was talking to Hurrican!

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